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where did you go my friend at a quick little pace
I brave the flashing lights for you
a dizzy blur of faces and far off places
just to catch a glimpse among fools

I'm just a simple man with a simple little life
making plans with a pretty ghost who never talks back
my words bounce off your shiny screen and
fall on your waiting list while others still scream

waiting too long for this
waiting far too long for this
waiting too long for this
waiting far too long for this

please don't cut your wrists too deep
this joy is just a temporary sleep
soon you'll wake up alone to me
I'm still waiting for you to leap
I open my mouth to speak
but it's just a buzzer beep

but where did all of your time go
but where did all of your time go
where did it all go
where did it all go


when all your fame is gone and you're standing in the rain
I hope we can go back again before this all came
wash a friendship that was stained all black
passing time and never looking back to when I was

waiting too long for this
waiting far too long for this
waiting too long for this
waiting far too long for this
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I'm still not completely happy with this. I've made so many changes in the past 24 hours. I'm just going to post this version since it most likely won't be the final one.

Sometimes my writing reveals things I'm not ready to admit, but for the sake of art I'm posting this anyway. I've been without a home internet connection for about a week now. It hurts to not be able to talk to people I once talked to daily. That's only part of this song.

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:icontheevilrentaro:
You did it again... i'm struck to the core by this...

i'm hearing a rock/metal riff in my head as I read this...

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-liked by few... ignored by many!
:iconarmatage:
Look up the song We Laugh Indoors by Death Cab For Cutie. I got partially inspired but it and it sorta flows the same way. I may turn this into a real song sometime in the future as I play guitar, but I'm not good enough to write music yet. Maybe someday this writing will get me famous this way. :D

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:iconpunkgoddess:
<3 You &Gibbard. Seriously, i'm glad a different style of music has inspired you. ha, you make me want to listen to more deathcab/postalservice/allamericanquaterback (orwhateverhisotherbandis..omgnospaces).

and yes you will become famous.
only if you make me your bassist, or pianist or back up guitarist or something. :D maybe even cellist?

hahaha. <3 oh and i have to direct all your music videos.
and take your promotional photos.

the yes. you will become famous.

involve yourself with me and magical things will happen. :D <33333
move up here, get a job, help pay the rent for the appartment i want and we'll write music and movies and stuff.
do eet. doo eet. you know you wanna.
:iconarmatage:
uhhh YES TO ALL <3 :D I thought we were doing the Rodrigo y Gabriela thing? I should get my acoustic soon so watch out fame here we come.

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Disregard that last comment.
:iconpunkgoddess:
:D yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah. and i think i might take GEETAR at the college along with some PIANO!

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